Yourmomsuckedme's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Experiment Collection]

yo.

Definitely not horrible. Not the greatest animation I've seen but it's a good start. The shorts are kinda terrible. The longer ones are a bit better.

Most people will just send one short in and expect a save, I like how you added multiple shorts in a clean format. Just try to improve the quality of each one and make it longer.

Make the return to menu button easier to locate please. Not everyone will read that giant wall of text.

[Bunnykill 4]

Snowball

Is an awesome character. This series is awesome. The animation is great. The action is great.

What happened to the kill count used in the other Bunny Kill flashes?

This is the only series that I know of that doesn't even try to use a story line to link the flashes. It's still 10/10 but it would be even better if there was a story line. Just a suggestion.

Keep up the great work.

Mottis responds:

Thnx, I ditched the killcounter because it kinda got in the way of my work. With it, I focused more on the sheer amount of kills, rather than making them look cool and more unique.

[Zone-mus 2]

its good but

You should use other stick people instead of robotic balls. It would make it more exciting since your flash skills aren't that great yet. After a while it was tedious to watch a stick figure killing balls.

The audio wasn't that bad. In the future if you can instead of giving a prologue have voice acting tell the story.

Hope I helped.

TheTwoImps responds:

Thats what I am going to try with my next zone-mus, it might turn out differnt than I think though, anyways thanks. I might be doing a sprite movie next time.

[Mastermind 4]

Great as always

I really enjoy your work. I've watched each episode and I have nothing bad to say about any of your flashes. This one especially is great. Watching one of these flashes always makes me laugh. A big-shot criminal with a childish personality was a hilarious idea. I love the whole series. This flash was especially funny.

In future work I hope you actually show him doing something other than scenes of the mastermind arguing with his henchmen. Have some action clips put into it. Like in your game where mastermind's henchmen stole science, robbed banks and kidnapped/killed important political leaders. Those can turn out to be some great scenes.

I personally think your flashes are progressing in terms of quality and your humor. Keep up the great work I look forward to seeing more in this series. I voted 5/5 on every single one of your mastermind series games/flash. They are all great.

[Samurai Cat]

Great Job!

The drawings and such need work but that will come with time and practice. I liked the "wanted" posters idea. The ending was great. I liked them teaming up against an army. My favorite part was when you showed the blue and red dots surrounded. Hopefully your able to make this into a series. I'd enjoy watching it.

This is a great first time submission. Much better than others. Keep up the great work and you'll be able to make outstanding flash in no time!

[The Ballad of CrippleKane]

Cliche Western but...

So at first I thought it was going to be crappy. However, I liked it. The music drew me in while he was walking through the saloon. Then the action had me stay until the end.

The funniest part was the detachable leg which fell off while they were riding the other way on the train. When he pulled the leg of with his rope his expression was great.

I love the silhouette of Cripple Kane at the end it was a nice touch. The credits were well-put together. The whole flash was a great action western scene which is what I think you were aiming for. 5/5 Great Job!